Critique and whatnot.

[Gypsypm5k]

Hey hey hey.

I know everyone seems to be doing this these days, but here goes. I want to ask you kind folk, the GXWites and such, what you think of Chris Lehew as a character (and what you think I could do to improve him) and my RP style/skill/whatever (and how, again, I can improve upon these things).

In my own opinion (that of "Mr. No Self Esteem" Zach Malmgren), my RP ability and Chris Lehew as a whole character went down the drain when 'Recipe for Hate' ended, so I wont be offended regardless of what you say.

Uh. Have fun. Yay!

-Zach

 

[tylerdurden]

Hey man...

Zach,

dude, I think that what you've got with Lehew could be seriously AWESOME, you've already made him into something seriously kick ass. One thing you might want to do is make him a little more sadistic... if you are going with the Career Ender name, you would be awesome if you like started a crazy ass run to try and destroy your opponents. I mean, I'm talkin' like old school ##### where you focus on one part of the body, like the knee, and just rip it apart. That would work great. You have great RP skills man, just follow up on that name. That's a great idea, I almost wish I had thought about it. You did some great work with Zero, and I noticed how you said that you felt Lehew has declined since after Recipe for Hate, but if you handle all your opponents with the same kind of "i really f*cking hate you" kind of attitude, dude it would be too sweet. Well that's just my opinion. =) I think that Lehew's really a great character man... I would actually be interested in talking to you about maybe working with my other character Eric Davis some more.... if you want to reach me, my email is untouchablemayhem@hotmail.com Feel free to contact me if you want to work something out, but if you don't I won't take that personally either hehe.

Peace, John

PS. If you could go to MY critique thread for Miller and maybe drop me some suggestions as well, that would be great dude, I'm looking for help too.

 

[youknowwho]

I think you suck total ass, you choad.

>Hey hey hey.
>
>I know everyone seems to be doing this these days, but here
>goes. I want to ask you kind folk, the GXWites and such,
>what you think of Chris Lehew as a character (and what you
>think I could do to improve him) and my RP
>style/skill/whatever (and how, again, I can improve upon
>these things).
>
>In my own opinion (that of "Mr. No Self Esteem" Zach
>Malmgren), my RP ability and Chris Lehew as a whole
>character went down the drain when 'Recipe for Hate' ended,
>so I wont be offended regardless of what you say.
>
>Uh. Have fun. Yay!
>
>-Zach

 

[Gypsypm5k]

Yeah, well this choad kicked your ass.

No wait, that didn't really happen.

 

[InfernoDrop]

Z,
I think I've gotta agree with you know who, up there. You reek of suckaucity and just wanna be me. Oh. And how bout's them Sweedes, eh?

 

[WEAVER]

Dang dude...

Chris Lehew is a evil prick. I hate him.

And that's a good thing. Evil = Good.

Keep it up.

Scotty/Gemini

 

[youknowwho]

Well I suppose I'll be nice and give you a real reply. (Sarcasm mode off)

Lehew is a pretty cool character already. I wouldn't worry about tweaking him too much. The only thing I would suggest would be to give him more of a focus on something. What does he believe in? What is his goal here? If he's not fighting Nate Logan IS THERE a goal or motive at all? Basically, expand yourself to outside the Zero-Lehew rivalry. You can do that with this thing with Sampson so the base for it is there. It's just up to you to make it compelling.

(sarcasm mode back on) But you still suck.

 

[Gypsypm5k]

S'gonna be Sweden and USA for the gold. Sweden's gonna rip John Leclair and Mike Richter a new one. Either way I win! Yay! (Me being an American swede.)

Oh, and you suck. At least I don't ride Stephen Groves all night long. For weeks at a time.

 

[tylerdurden]

Dude... what have i been saying....

oh my.... for 2 years now i've been saying "sweden's gonna win the gold, sweden's gonna win" did anybody ever take me seriously???? NOOOOOOOOOOOO! And now.... LOOK! I had my freaking senior picture taken with the Swedish flag! My email was rookie.sensation@SWEDEN.com! I had a sweden patch on my jersey!!!!! My hockey number is 19 after Naslund.... BANDWAGONERS! Sike i'm just kidding, you can like them too, but hey, Markus Naslund is the fucking greatest player out there and you all know it. =)

Peace,
John

 

[Gypsypm5k]

FORSEBERG!

Forseberg, bitch! Forseberg!

Espn had a whole article on him kicking ass a little while ago. Called him arguebly the best hockey player in the world, and hyped him up... they even said that were he not injured, he'd be kicking everyone's ass. He'd be the captain of team sweden (since he was named it last summer), at the very least.

My hockey number is 12, for no freakin' reason. I guess it's some Rookie's number these days. 12 kick's 19's ass. Naslund just ripped off Yzerman who ripped off Sakic in the first place. HAH

'sides, what do you know? You like the Penguins. Penguins suuuuck.

Word.I like how we've turned my critique thread into a hockey debate.

-Zach

 

[tylerdurden]

RE: FORSEBERG!

AHEM AHEM.

Excuse me Zach, but the name is FORSBERG. He is king of all hockey, and yes, I KNOW HE IS THE BEST. He is my freakin' favorite player, and notice how when I said that Naslund is the best player out there, it was only because Peter isn't playing right now. I would have been number 21 on my hockey team, if not for the number having been taken by my "friend" <cough>assfucker<cough> Josh. Dude, Sweden is the #####.... and so are the Penguins. So what if they're in last place, they still rule. So eat my ass! Bob, I normally wouldn't ask for this, but back me up here. It's the Pens...

John

 

[InfernoDrop]

PENGUINS

WHOO! *Waves his Penguins flag* Goo, below .500 Penguins! Yay! Way to suck guys! But it's true, it's true...they are still the bestest. You wait. Season is not over yet, Zach. The Penguins still have a..uhm...chance. Yes.

Robert S. Barton, USN