HUNTING MASTODON PART 1
And so the game begins…
RUNDOWN + ABOUT THAT CLEAN AND FAIR THING
Only I edited the rundown at the end, Dames, because the main event wasn’t scheduled publicly, just in case you read it and see the change… ANYWAY… Hah, nice little shot at Ty there, “the best in the business… and Tyrone Walker.” I always like those kind of jabs. Like the Angus line acknowledging MAHBOITAI yet also siding with the heel… KEYBOARD WARRIOR, hah, I would have written Euge selling, yelling at the fans to shutup, etc, then when LT is selling the amusement, have Euge go with the cheapshot… Good stuff start to finish.
WATCH YOUR BALLS… AND YOUR MOUTH
Wrote this with Jon.
MUSHIGIHARA vs BUTCHER VICTORIOUS
Okay I want to point something out, we need to get some real bios up for these BRAZEN guys if they’re going to be used… or at least some kind of basic moveset, even if that’s just a link to a wikipedia page that the character’s style might be based off of.
As for the match itself. I’m not sure if I would have had Butcher get as much offense as he did, or at least not a big finish move to win it. Dunno, I think another flukey win would have been better, but it does keep up with this snakebit run that Mushi is on, so it still works. Dug everything with the post match, look forward to what you intend to do with this.
A DIFFERENT SAM
Short and simple, begins to really intro Sam to DEFIANCE. Just keep it going, Sam, and don’t stall out and ruin any moment you build up.
HUNTING MASTODON PART 2
Evan digging deep on the layout images for locations to use, nice. Also kept it short and to the point, no need for three plus pages of meaningless banter… One issue, FDJ couldn’t have been banned three years ago, since the Wrestle-plex didn’t exist yet, just saying. Minor details, no big whoop (and can easily be corrected if necessary).
A LOOK AT A NEW ALL STAR / BOUT TO BE A DEAD ONE
SETHROW RETURNS! And he’s gonna get it started with one of the BRAZEN kids, food for thought for everyone else who might not have something to do (at any given time). LT dropping knowledge and going #MOMmode on Bigsby and challenges Hoffman. This is basically Lindz with us degenerates haha, dug it.
BRONSON BOX vs MASCARA DE MUERTE IV
Evan wrote the match, I wrote the back end.
ITS OFFICIAL
Liked that Dave put Kelly on equal footing with Ryan (boss, performer). I also SUPER appreciate that you played up her being annoyed (or acknowledging) the lack of respect she’s been afforded given her position. Something that is going to continue to build as Evan and I have ideas. Also the hat tip from Ryan to Evans works well.
YOU BOYS ARE WORKING ON MY LAST NERVE
Wrote this with Evan, it was his call to take part of it out and I saw how we could use that part for material to play with between now and 56 and AOD (twitter, news, one ppv segment, etc). Hope the flow between this and Brunk’s segment works (and the Boxer/MDM4 post match).
PICK ON SOMEONE YOUR OWN SIZE
This whole segment was really nicely done, and best of all, it put a newer character (Harmony) in the same orbit as an established character (Lindz). Liked that it added some personality to Carla Ferrari, further played up Iris Davine’s stubborn insistence when it comes to her job, and it set up the PPV match for Harm vs Mushi. Good stuff all around.
LINDSAY TROY vs REINHARDT HOFFMAN
HAAAH you named Euge’s senton splash a Bob-omb! That’s super, truly super. The actual write up of the match was solid, making Hoffman look credible, but not damaging the obviously superior LT. Like that you played up the Euge Senton with the chair as being a thing he’s trying to do, little details like that matter.
HUNTING MASTODON PART 3
MOAR BRAZEN! Also, Nicky being hogtied sounds really, really painful for a man of his size. I anticipate the follow up to this on 56, w00t.
CURTIS PENN vs TYRONE WALKER
Jon had this written weeks ago and just reworked it for new booking, still done well and keeps things moving to where they need them to go.
What did we do right?
The show was on time and easy to read, let’s continue this trend.
What did we do wrong?
Little nitpicky typos, nothing else.
Match of the Night?
Main Event.
Segment of the Night?
Pick On Someone Your Own Size with LT, Harm, Iris, and Carla.
Top Face of the Night?
Lindsay Troy.
Top Heel of the Night?
Eugene Dewey.
Favorite Quotes?
Eugene Dewey:
No games, no funny business, just a clean and fair fight between the very best in this company… and Tyrone Walker.
(zing)
How was the overall reading experience?
Quick and painless, let's keep this up.
