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Ulfric

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Name - Jace Harrison

Hometown - Chattanooga, TN

Height - 5’10

Weight -205

Face/Heel-Face

Age - 20

Experience - He’s been wrestling for three years now, trained initially in Minneapolis Minnesota while attending college there and majoring in graphic design, his size was a disadvantage to him there, so he sold his car and everything else he owned aside from clothing to raise the funds to get himself to Japan. There he worked and trained before finally beginning his wrestling career.

Appearance - Red blond hair, green eyes, he’s clean shaven accept for a neat goatee. His hair is shoulder length, he ties it back in the ring, does not tie it back outside of it. He is well built, muscular, and generally wears jeans and a t-shirt and flannel shirt outside of the ring, wears shit kickers pretty much year round for footwear.

Ring Attire - He wears tights, full length, air brushed with various design and color combinations. One pair is black and blue, another red and black, one is green and black, another orange and black and the last is white and black. He never wears a t-shirt to the ring and he paints his face to match the color of the tights he’s wearing that night. He will also put corresponding streaks of color in his hair as well. The airbrush designs are usually like interwoven colors with no discernable patterns.

Entrance - His entrance music is Shinedown “Sound of Madness” and he does, for the most part, walk to the ring. He takes the time as he steps out from behind the curtain look around at the crowd, usually his head is moving in time to the music before he starts making his way to the ring. He slaps hands with the fans, hugs some of the woman on the way down to the ring, he always takes his time, takes time with the fans, will even pose for a moment with any kids who paint themselves up like him.

Wrestling Style - His style is hard hitting, head dropping, aerial. He did have a background in high school wrestling, he was on the high school wrestling team, and had a descent, though not stellar win/loss record. He wrestled all four years in college, in Minneapolis, as well as trained as a professional wrestler his last year there before he headed to Japan and learned the more hard hitting, high flying, technical aspect of his wrestling style there.

Personality - He’s quiet, he doesn’t say a whole hell of allot, he let’s his abilities do his talking for him. He’s slow to anger, but once he is angry he does have quiet a temper.

Major Strengths or Weaknesses - His major strength is his patience and his willingness to study opponents. He is willing to take risks as well, more then willing, he loves going to the air, he loves to train as well and to learn and will take every opportunity to do so. His major weakness is his size, he is smaller, he is a cruiser and there are moves that he will not be able to use on men who are extremely large.

Finisher: Lightning Spiral


Secondary Finisher: Dragonrana


Ten Frequently Used Moves - (Start with your trademark moves, things related to setting up your finisher etc etc. The match writers will be educated on writing your character appropriately based on the "wrestling style" section above. So make this list out of your special stuff.)Movelist:
Short- arm clothesline
Running knee lift
headlock takedown
front chancery
standing dropkick
hangman's neckbreaker
La Majistral cradle
Fisherman buster
Dragon Suplex
Northern lights suplex
Rolling wheel kick
DDT (ground and top rope DDT. Leap spinning DDT)
Indian deathlock
sitout powerbomb
Belly to back wheelbarrow facebuster


Trade Mark Moves:
Falcon's arrow
Cradle piledriver
Corkscrew Senton
Thunder Fire Powerbomb
Corkscrew 450 splash
Black Tiger Bomb
720 DDT
 

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So, um, not to be rude, but does he have a gimmick at all? Or is he just "four-year experienced young wrestleman"?
 

Ulfric

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Not sure yet, it's a character reboot, i sort of hate what ive been doing with him for the last year, so he has a new name and i'll know for sure what the gimmick's going to be once i start writing with him.
 

Greer

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I don't understand your moveset. You even acknowledge in the "weaknesses" section that 85% of the moveset are obsolete unless facing another flippity-do spot monkey, so why even include them? Also, the random "Indian Deathlock" thrown in apropros of nothing disturbs me.

"He’s quiet, he doesn’t say a whole hell of allot" makes promos difficult, eh?

You've been in the game long enough, clean it up a little and give more insight as to why this guy is not just a "wrestler who went to Japan and studies opponents" unless that's the gimmick, that he's a calculated tactician. If so, say so.
 
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Kahrytes

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Oh, this is Jake Donovan with a new coat of paint?

Eh.

If you give him a personality, sure. To be blunt, before he was Jeff Hardy without the drug abuse and the serial numbers filed off and a pair of hangers-on that had even less personality.

Flesh out his personality, give him a gimmick. At least give us the elevator-story version of who he really is. If you really need help figuring him out, do one of those "who is this character" quizzes like http://www.writingclasses.com/InformationPages/index.php/PageID/106 or something.

You're a solid writer, but honestly, your characters in the past few years have just been a guy, and as such were hard to write in matches and harder to promo against, because there was nothing interesting to say.
 

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This is Defiance, and we don't really delete things around these part. If having everyone criticize your app has made you change your mind about coming back, well... fine, sorry you feel that way. If it's not, then keeping this app open is the best way to get your stuff up to what we want for Defiance.

Also, Defiance isn't one of those feds where all you have to do is write and if your writing is good you win, period. You have to be able to handle the selling characters and angles part of the game too.
 

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Ulfric

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I deleted because i am working on a new character, it'll be done soon, if the storm don't kill the power
 
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