Round Two Feedback Thread

[Ryan [NAPW]]

Great commentary sections between. I particularly liked the bit regarding D-X advancing while the current NAPW Tag champions have now lost (twice). It adds flavor to their in-fed rematch coming up as well as intrigue.

All NAPW semi-final. D-X or SB & Bruno advancing to meet either Blitz or Big Dog & Dan Ryan. I'm predicting for the finals...


The New & Improved D-X (sorry Andrew, you've got killer chemistry with your two characters, but D-X is not going to rest on being the best tag team of 2006... they have a whole new year here.)

-VS-

Big Dog & Dan Ryan (I don't think Blitz can handle the one-two punch of these two great wrestlers.)


Helluva final. PROVE ME WRONG! Hahahaha.

 

[Linguistic]

Thanks for the feedback, Ryan. I really didn't feel like I did as well this time around as I did with the first round card, but my strength is that I try to figure out all of the characters and use that in the dialogue between Simon and Creek (although I think my commentary for Creek has become watered down).

Hope everyone enjoys! I'll get the RP threads up tomorrow or the 2nd!

 

[Ryan [NAPW]]

Thanks for the feedback, Ryan. I really didn't feel like I did as well this time around as I did with the first round card, but my strength is that I try to figure out all of the characters and use that in the dialogue between Simon and Creek (although I think my commentary for Creek has become watered down).

Hope everyone enjoys! I'll get the RP threads up tomorrow or the 2nd!

You just need more non-sequiters about donkeys.

What?

 

[TheOriginalSE]

Another good show!

It's a shame that Nakita and Karla went to the double countout, especially with the incredible RP battle they had .. but as a fedhead I know sometimes its very difficult to pick a winner and that this is the only route to go (I'm assuming as such although it could have been an angle submitted by the two of them). So while it may be disappointing to not have a winner, the mere RP war between them definitely made this round something to watch.

I loved the line about how Creek had yet to have been proven that Lindsay Troy was indeed a female.. one of my favorite lines I have read all year by an announcer.

Congrats to NAPW for having two teams going into the next round.. I don't get much of a chance to read their stuff outside of the TEAM and MCW events, but they've done incredibly well in both events and it really makes me want to start following their product more often. (And congrats to NAPW for their placing in Holzer's fed of the year standings ... you know you're hot stuff when Holzer ranks you ahead of MBE, A1E and AWC ... take that and the fact that D! and New and Improved DX took home his top places in two other categories and you know the league is smoking!)

You are much more forgiving about no showing than I am by having the teams not show up... when someone no shows for me I job them horribly.. maybe yours is the more diplomatic approach.

I'm looking forward to the semi's and the finals.. NEW's going to try to get a tag division started up soon, so maybe we'll throw a couple teams in the next go around.

 

[Linguistic]

Thanks for the feedback! It really bolstered my self-confidence. After this tournament is over with, I plan on taking a break from e-fedding to make sure my life and career are all in order. I'll attack the e-fed scene right afterwards!

I'm hoping that the match between Nakita and Karla served to continue feuds in other feds. From what I was getting from the handlers involved, that seemed to be the idea behind it. I hope that the three of them will get involved.

I'm throwing in a special match for the next round. Announcements will be going up with the RP threads!