DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- FEED YOUR BACKS!! UNCUT #11 IS LIVE!!

[Jonathan Todd]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

I'll try and get Feed Back done. But then again it might not be this week since I work with a bunch of assholes who call out more frequently than they actually work.

 

[Evan H.]

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I feel ya' bud. But I'm literally sayin, the amount of words you JUST took the time type. A couple sentences, is all we're looking for at this point.

We "I'm too busy to feed backs" ourselves into like NO feedback, I quite literally (this is me talking here, not the whole staff) would be satisfied with just a couple lines when people are to busy to really dig into it and review the whole show.

We're honestly at this point just looking for acknowledgment people have read the show and whether the liked or not, not a show review from each member of the roster. Somethings better than nothing, you know?



EDIT
Honestly, if what's keeping people from leaving some feedback is like some... weird peer pressure to write the long segment by segment format and write a huge paragraph about EVERY segment, please just let that shit go.

Feedback how you want about however MUCH of the show you want. Just feedback something.

 

[User Poets]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

I feel ya' bud. But I'm literally sayin, the amount of words you JUST took the time type. A couple sentences, is all we're looking for at this point.

We "I'm too busy to feed backs" ourselves into like NO feedback, I quite literally (this is me talking here, not the whole staff) would be satisfied with just a couple lines when people are to busy to really dig into it and review the whole show.

We're honestly at this point just looking for acknowledgment people have read the show and whether the liked or not, not a show review from each member of the roster. Somethings better than nothing, you know?

This.

I may have been flippant when I said I'd publicly shame people but the real thing of it is that when the feedback every week is me, Murrr, Mikey, and Evan (not to discount the people who do feedback on an irregular basis), it does make me wonder who read the show beyond their own personal contributions.

There aren't even discussions in the chatroom, and I feel like if you read the show - always a good idea - and have time to hang in the chatroom you have time to drop a few lines of "I liked this and didn't like that."

 

[Evan H.]

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I mean, we're all busy. All of us. It just rings hollow that people have enough time to write PAGES of stuff for the shows but a couple short comments about our product, "oh shit no time... " The only answer I can think of is that people just aren't reading the whole card and skimming to their stuff only. Which if that's the case, please reevaluate what you're doing in DEF. lol

 

[Murrr]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

Feedback counts for a rather big slice of a handler's "overall contribution" in DEFIANCE, and what determines pushes, etc.?

Your overall contribution.

Put more in and you'll get more out. Simple.

For me, I'm kinda tired of reiterating this over and over again and seeing no results. I'm wondering if there's another way to actually boost the numbers, or if it's a lost cause. I'm really sick of hearing excuses, though.

 

[MikeyUnlikely]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

I'm opening the Beefdax Wrestling Alliance where its Mandatory! (only signs 3 wrestlers...and shuts down in one month)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

[DBrunkGXW]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

Ok, some off the top of my head feedback....

Evan just flat took control of our match. He had 90% of the thing mapped out before I even had a chance to breathe. He sent me a message something like "I've already mapped the whole thing out. Want me to just go ahead and write it?"

Um... well sure.

He only wanted help with planning out a finish, and I wanted this to be a clean but not emphatic win. Box got caught with a tactical maneuver. Works for both sides, both Ryan's newfound heelishness and Box's frustrations.

So huge props to Evan on that.

I didn't read most of everything else as closely, I have to admit, because it was the end of the month and I barely had time to breathe at work. I did some communications on my phone with people in between meetings and baseball practices, and that's about it.

But also, nothing stood out as being bad, so I have nothing negative to say really.

I will add on that any feedback, I really live for. Everything I write amuses ME. I want to know if OTHER people enjoy it. Making myself laugh is easy, but also, it means I'm descending into madness, and I don't plan for that to happen until 2025..... 2022 at the earliest.

So yes, please feedback. I'm not gonna be an ass about it. But let's feedback. It's important. It shows that we have a healthy collaborative environment when we all take ownership in each other's quality. It really matters.

 

[Evan H.]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

I will add on that any feedback, I really live for. Everything I write amuses ME. I want to know if OTHER people enjoy it.

So yes, please feedback. I'm not gonna be an ass about it. But let's feedback. It's important. It shows that we have a healthy collaborative environment when we all take ownership in each other's quality. It really matters.

 

[Jonathan Todd]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

Intro/Impulse/Penn -
Here’s what I get from this segment: Impulse really wants another match with Curtis, cool awesome. Let’s do it… wait Penn has other shit to handle. NO, we won’t. Throws up the deuce, later bitches.

Sam Horry vs Levi Cole
Basic squash match that was needed to have Sam put over and promote more Sam and Mushi.

Hard Hitting Questions:
Space filler. Could have been banter with DDK and Angus, but instead it’s with Cally and Jack.

Andy Sharp vs S.E.G.
Pretty good match for a gauntlet match. Fuck that noise. It’s hard enough to write 1 really good match, but it was pretty nice seeing a gauntlet match done on a TV card.

An End, Once and For All/Cayle Murray vs Eric Dane:
I am and always will be a mark for anything Eric Dane related. He’s the OWNER of DEFIANCE. He owns the ring, literally, ass hat. And Cayle Murray might have a concussion. What’s DEFIANCE’s concussion protocol?
Signed and Sealed in Blood!
DEFCON DANE V MURRAY
Teaser Trailer:
Okay I have to say that I do dig me some Mikey Unlikely. But you renamed the SO HER. Penn is gonna Kill YOU!
Mikey vs LAR:
I HEART Heels and how they win.
Conclave Chaos:
Gene done fucked up. Love this story. I have loved it ever since Dewey turned. This will go down as one of the top stories that DEFIANCE has ever told.
FDJ vs Penn:
Justin and I did this. My only thing is that it had too many guest spots. With Mushi and Dante. Harmony. And Impulse at that end. The Harmony thing is supposed to push the FDJ and Harm story… got that. Impulse coming out and pushes the Penn and Pulse story. Mushi coming out and not doing anything really didn’t make any sense to me, but hey everyone needs an outlet.

Blowing It Up Differently:
Penn done went and got underneath Impulse’s skin.

A Motive Not All That Ulterior:
I see what happened there.

Lighting Fires:
Video Package.

Bronson Box vs Dan Ryan:
A match that could have headlined every PPV we’ve ever had, just scaled down for TV.

Now for my comments: Feedback is important, like staying away from drugs type important.

 

[kendrix]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

Hi peeps. Sorry for lateness of my beef.

Intro/Penn/Impulse: Penn is such an asshole, I love it! Great line about not recognizing Impulse without his shoulders on the mat! Cheap but brilliant.

Andy Sharp v S.E.G. Gauntlet: Kudos to Seth. I really enjoyed reading this match, even though I knew about the outcome. Sharp looks great overcoming three people in one match, not without a little help from LAR which sets up the SOHER title match later in the eve.

An End Once and For All/Cayle Murray and Eric Dane Teaser trailer: I love where this is going and has been going for some time now. It's written so well. Cayle has taken so much punishment and keeps getting back up for more yet Dane is always in control. Looking forward to the PPV match, will Cayle finally get one over on the BAWS?!

Mikey vs LAR. Really good match up, looks like LAR has this and then Kendrix remembers that he likes to use chairs! Sharp performs flippy do moves to take out SEG and Mikey somehow escapes with his title yet again!

Conclave Chaos: This was awesome. From Jane's put downs of the chanting fans all the way through to Dewey tearing up Bronsons' conclave. Nice response from Dewey over his brother's attack from the last show. Again, really looking forward to the outcome of the PPV match. Great work!

FDR v Penn: Nice win for FDR and then Impulse gets a little pay back over Penn. Finishes off the nice set up from the beginning of the show.

Lightning Fires: Nice video package, not seen much of these prior to matches since I've been efedding (which hasn't been long), would be keen to see more of these. Nice length as well, short and sweet.

Ryan v Box: Just wow guys. I loved this and as someone who hasn't written a lot of matches, this is something that will help me improve my game a lot. This could easily of had a ppv feel (because this kind of match up deserves it) but it didn't go on for too long and had the right balance for tv show time.

Sorry it's late but these were the highlights of the show for me!

 

[Evan H.]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

UNCUT 9

OPEN
Me.

DEFtv EXCLUSIVE: OUTTA THE WAY
Love "stuff that was cut for time" stuff from the previous DEFtv, excellent utilization of this show. Good seg.

"LITTLE" WOMAN
This is one of the better babyface vs. babyface angles we've ever done, very good job building the tension over this arc. Might be the best most substantive thing we've had Frank do in a long time.

HELLO, FAITHFUL
Fuck yeah brother, jump in feet first. Love the promo, and love the immediate Twitter presence.

HOME AGAIN HOME AGAIN
Me. (grrr, rah, bad guy, grah)

A SLIGHT SNAG
Man, you find a way each card to take the simplest of segment premises and just write these great concise little scenes that don't overstay their welcome and absolutely get across where Impulse is "at." And you do it consistently. Good job man.

BRUVCUT AND BRUVCENSORED
I pull on you two's pud enough, obviously this is fucking fantastic. Slash, the little relationship the Bruv's are forming with Christie Zane is great. Most consistent use of poor ignored Christie in the entire lifespan of her existence, lol.

DEFtv EXCLUSIVE: JASON NATAS VS. SEAN JACKSON
See comments above to the lead in segment. GREAT use of UNCUT to make DEFtv "bigger" but not overcrowd the actual card. Tucked in the middle of DEFtv it might have gotten a little lost, but putting it here gives the match a chance to really stand out on its own.


Great show!

 

[kendrix]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- DEFtv 66 IS LIVE!

Intro: Quick and to the point, Angus ain't wasting no time...and we have a match? on Uncut? Superb!

Outta the way: Natas is angry, wants to beat the shit out of Sean Jackson, instead is left with that slimey Marshall Owens. Great build up for the match at the end of the night. Marshall leaves Natas with a threat/timely reminder about the state of his knee...

"little" woman: FDR, despite trying not to, manages to piss off harmony! Looking forward to seeing how this one plays out. Agree with Evan, nice set up for the two babyfaces.

Hello Faithfull: New character alert! Bedlam is in the house! Nice intro, I like the cut of this guys jib. Seems like he has a similar attitude to Cecil Farthington...well at least I kind of read it like that. Looking forward to seeing more from this guy.

Home Again Home Again: The aftermath of Dewey's destruction of Box's school. Spud thinks Box has gone soft, far from it! Great stuff again from Evan, this feud has really caught and kept my attention (I have a poor attention span! This is good!)

A Slight Snag: Evans ain't giving Impulse what he wants as easy as that, gotta work for it! I'm looking forward to seeing how he will manage to persuade Penn into a match at the PPV!

Bruvcut and Bruvcensored: Idiots!

Jackson v Natas: Sneak attack by Jackson onto Natas' knee as soon as he makes his entrance. Classic Jackson, evil intentions from the word go. Natas takes one hell of a beating but gives some back. That knee is f'd though. Nice finish with Natas opting to pass out rather than tap. Great stuff all round and nice to see a match on uncut!

Great show, flowed really well!

 

[MikeyUnlikely]

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Outta The Way!
Loved this, nice way to play up the feud and get more interaction. Playing off the match that just happened was a nice touch. Without Mike Bell here I dont know how far we take this Jackson thing, but im so glad to see Murrr finishing it out for the sake of the story.

“Little” Women
This fell a little flat to me, I am interested in the angle and its been good albeit different this arc. Its nice to see Harmony make the change we requested and to grow from there, but this one just didnt pack a punch for me. Maybe the two can settle it out in the ring on DEFtv.

Hello Faithful
Nice Intro from Johnny Bedlam. Well written “hello” from one of the new guys. I liked it, and looking forward to moar.

Home Again Home Again
Bronson Box’s response to Eugene destroying his facility. Box is pissed but does not press charges against Dewey. Box wants to settle it in the ring, and presumably kill the man… but he wants to build him up first what a swell guy!

A Slight Snag
YUS YUS YUS! <3 you PETA. this makes my complaint about DEFtv go away. 100% terrific way to turn it around.

Bruvcut and Bruvcensored.
Expect more stuff like this on Uncut that follows no storyline or narrative and is just there for Steven and I’s amusement. We like exploring how shallow and moronic these two are. (Justin gave me an idea for this seg about 3 months ago...its been sitting and simmering since then.)

Jackson vs Natas
BRUTAL attack by SJackson. Nice little match with a couple hope spots for the face but mostly just allllllllll killing Jason Natas and his knee. Liked the way this was written and would have liked to see something other than the “pass out” but it is a good finish, its just overdone. More people pass out than tap out these days.

 

[The God-Beast]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

DEFtv 67 BEEFDAX: RAWB STARTS GETTING THE HANG OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM (Part 1)

I really enjoyed this show; Impulse and Penn is shaping up to be a pretty amazing feud, and Andy Sharp’s chase for the Southern Heritage Championship is one of my favorite title chases in recent memory, in no short part because Mikey Unlikely’s scuzziness makes for a champion you want to see get his ass handed to him.
Dane/Murray is going to be an absolute barnburner. Definitely one of my most anticipated DEFCON matches.

If I have a nitpick, it’s what appears to be an overreliance on “big screen video” altercation segments. I know that I had a part in one, yeah, but three on one show is a bit excessive in my opinion.

Not gonna comment on me and Sam’s feud because I don’t want to pile on.

All in all, a great little step on the road to DEFCON. I can’t wait for what the go-home show has to offer.

 

[JerryWonder]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

Intro: Ol Angus, ain't fackin about. +
Outta the way: Like Owens, he's a scoundrel. This is a great beatin' on the door seg. +
"little" woman: I think I need to read more of this character, I was a bit lost. Still good with the dialect though. +
Hello Faithfull: This fukkin guy!
Home Again Home Again: I like the desolate and angry tone of this one a whole lot. The interplay between Box's Rocky to homeboy's Mickey...very nice and genuine. +
A Slight Snag: Nice little slyness from the boss lady. Well done. +
Bruvcut and Bruvcensored: These fackin guys. The interplay was very good, very inventive little idea here. +
Jackson v Natas: This match had poise, precision and audacity. Sooo brutal. Well done.

Kickass show. I hope this wasn't too embarrassing a first feedback.

 

[User Poets]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

Decent show - not sure if we have Uncut in two weeks but if not, it's a good enough go-home "Uncut" before the big one. The Natas/Jackson stuff was a good finale, I don't know if the match is now being cut from the PPV but if it is, it leaves a good opening for Bell to come back if he's ever able.

Glad people are enjoying the Penn/Pulse stuff. Love working with Jon, and glad to finally give him a feud conclusion.

Good intro to Johnny Bedlam. Does its job, makes people want to see the debut. Makes me want to see it, at least.

Harmony vs. FDJ is building to something, and I can see a bunch of different directions it could go, and can't predict any of them so I'm doubly a fan.

And, the Bruvs. Always with the Bruvs. Obvs the highlight.

Totally obvs.

 

[Stalker]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

Show Opener:
Funny jab at the show in general indicating that there would be an actual wrestling match on the program.


Outta the way:
Nice little opening piece. Since this is my first card I have read, I wasn't exactly sure of what happened between Natas and Jackson, but obviously Natas was pissed. As for the lawyer, Owens, guy sounds like a little twerp who needs his ass whipped. I'm hoping that happens later in the card.


Little Woman:
Harmony and Frank Dylan James getting into an argument that sparks a show down on the next card I'm guessing? Good stuff, Harmony doesn't sound like she was too thrilled with FDJ's words. Honestly I was a little put off, had to read them at least twice to know what he was saying at some points.


Hello Faithful:
Nice little call out from Bedlam's first on air promo? (I'm guessing.) Although according to his OOC post today he quit..? I dunno sad to see a new face go so quick.


Home Again Home Again:
Bronson Boxer is awesome. I loved this segment, first time ever reading a thing on him and it immediately grabbed my attention. It was nice seeing Spud Collins stand up to him the way that he did, and it looks like Eugene Dewey is in for a world of hurt and I can't wait to continue to read up on what happens next.


A Slight Snag:
Good old Impulse. Got to love him, vigilant non rule breaker that he is. I can't wait to see how this develops. (I'm a huge Impulse fan and hoping this makes him break… just a little.)


Bruvcut and BruvCensored:
What the fuck did I just witness? Oh my god… where do I sign up on this hype train? One of the funniest things I have read in a long time. Seriously these guys need a t-shirt. I have never been able to pull a gimmick or even think about pulling a gimmick off like this, because I am just not that funny. It was an incredible joy reading this and I think I'm going to cut my way back through the shows just for the Bruvs. Obvs right? We can say whatever the fuck we want. Hellfire, Chris Hopper, Dildo Baggins, Magic the Gathering. I'm going to tap this promo so hard it's never going to untap. Okay I'm done.

Natas vs. Jackson
Right off the bat cheap shots from Jackson, quick start to the match for sure. DDK advising of the time frame is took Natas to return to the ring was a nice touch in the opening brutal attack from behind. Man… I hope Natas is alright. That was a cheap win by Jackson. Hate that guy already. Scratch that, Jackson is okay. Owens needs a nut punch.

Overall enjoyed the read. First fantasy wrestling card I have read in a lonnnnnggg time. But it was enjoyable for what it was.

 

[User Poets]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

68 feedback

The Rundown Wait No The BAWS

We don't see this often enough, that a main event is put in place at the start of a show, and it was quite a show. Dane's run through of all of the DEF inside jokes was a thing of beauty. Loving this seg.

BAWBAGS

Speaking of inside jokes, I love how everything we made fun of about Phillybro has become a thing that the Bruvs do. Heelness abounds, also Drakebros.

RCR vs. PCP

OMG.

Ok, seriously. These are the types of matches both teams have to have. PCP does their sports entertainment thing, while the RCR kicks ass. Even with PCP losing, both teams go over huge.

No Means No

Curtis Penn doesn't wanna fight.

Off-Mauve

Always a fan of Juice's descriptive text. Makes me proud to write dialogue. Great interplay between Dane and Dean, along with the continuation of the fact that Dane is the BAWS, so he has to pay for all of the things at the show. Poor Robert can't catch a break.

Harmony vs. FDJ

Dunno if we can still refer to them as friends. FDJ reluctant to hurt Harmony, Harmony offended by this reluctance. Loved how she won the match via countout and was wholly offended by it. Going to be an interesting rematch at DEFCON.

Not Tonight

Good way to move around Natas and further his feud with Jackson without having him there. Always a fan of authority figures or security guards or whoever not being a face or a heel, but just being some dude or girl with a job to do. Bronson isn't trying to screw the heroes, he's just following the boss's orders. You could say Dane wanted to keep Natas out to screw Cayle later in the night but with Mom at his side he was already covered.

Territorial Pissings

Asian Daniel Ryan is such a douche, and I love his role in this fed.

The Bruvs vs. The SHLARPS

(Sidenote - awesome tag team name. You're welcome.)

Evolution is a beautiful thing. Watching Angus fight his own admiration for JFK's wrestling ability when measured against his Bruvness was awesome. I hope to continue to see Angus be a self - hating Kendrix fan. But this match additionally got all of the points across that it needed; we had the non-feuding pair involved in the finish, and the heels incredulous at it. Aces.

Old Yeller

This makes me miss Bell. Having a feud between the FIST and "The Rightful World Champion" once the Ryan/Troy and Natas/Jackson feuds are over would be a thing I would like to see. Come back, Bell!

Mushi vs. Pennshi

Angus' hatred for Curtis Penn is a thing of beauty. Decent little match that furthers Mushi vs Horry, with the added (negative to the fans) benefit of giving Curtis Penn a win and some bragging rights. Puts all three of them in a good place for DEFCON (I notice a theme here).

These Are Not the Droids you're Looking For

I'm really amused by the fact that he's a "Buoyant" Bobby Dean. Beyond that, the surprise return of Andy Murray was a welcome one, and makes us realize that Cayle has things covered with Natas' absence.

Does It Really?

I wrote this with Jon

(Sidenote: Jon, you're getting to finish a program!)

Box vs. JACK HUNTER

This was all about Bronson, which is perfectly fine.

Road to Redemption

The counterpoint. This one is shaping up to be a legacy match for the ages. I love hearing both of them talk and thinking that they both have valid points and it's not really clear who the villain is supposed to be. Just two ships, sailing in the DEF is all.

Won't Get Fooled Again

Finally, some babyface interaction. Nice to see some good natured ribbing and hyping each other up. We don't get enough of that pre-match.

And of course, a parting shot at Johnny Bedlam. We barely remembered your name.

Mom and Squid vs. SURE! and BAWS

Dunno how I feel about this match. I don't like that one feud member pinned the other feud member to end it, but at the same time, you can't have the BAWS get pinned in some nothing tag match, you can't have the FIST get pinned, and it could undermine the #1 Contender to get pinned. I guess the safest finish would've been Dane pinning Troy or Ryan pinning Cayle, , but I'm not going to discount Dane pinning Cayle since it was simply not the obvious choice. Would have been REALLY interesting if Cayle somehow pinned Dan Ryan to finish it.

Overall, this was a standard go-home show. Non-standardly, every major program leading into the PPV had something happen to move it forward, and everything heated the rivalries up just a bit more. Really looking forward to see how things are blown off.

 

[Stalker]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

(Disclaimer: I write my thoughts as I read the card.)

Right to business, then:

Great way to start the show! Awesome build up for the main event to come, I enjoyed the back and forth and Eric Dane's name calling was quite good. I do have one question though what in the world is up with the ninja stars?

The question above was when I was mid way through the segment, wasn't expecting a fight to break out. Loved every bit of this seg. Great work!

Bawbags:

Bawb…what? Second segment I've read from the Bruvs. Excellent work can't wait to see LAR vs. Kendrix at the PPV. Just a random opinion but I would love to see an actual graphic of Mikey Money. Please.

RCR vs. PCP:

LOL David Spade references. Holy shit Rocko Daymon!! (Keep in mind I'm doing my best to keep up with all the wrestlers in Defiance, all the documents in the resource link etc. I just wasn't expecting Rocko on the show, didn't know he was in RCR. Mark out moment.) Love Rocko Daymon and I'm familiar with Kerry Kuroyama, our characters have a lot of past with each other.

DDK:
Carrier pigeon? No seriously, Klein just handed me a pigeon with a note on it. He also said cell phones are Satan.

^ This.

That was a weird damn match.

No Means No:

Curtis Penn's promo is good stuff, I hope there is more to this story later in the card.

Off-Mauve:
Eric Dane has plans for Cayle Murray. Fat Ned Flanders? Damn straight lol. I enjoyed it.

Harmony vs. FDJ:

Square dancing lessons! I am taking notes. This was a great story telling matches. I'm brand new to the characters other than Uncut #9 (I'm trying to catch up) But this was great, especially FDJ leaving the ring after almost destroying Harmony. To be honest when the match first started I was not expecting it to escalate to this. Anyways Harmony picks up the win and I'm sure there will be more to this.

Not Tonight:

Natas being told he can't wrestle tonight. Sucks for him, but in the end better chance he can shut down that punk Sean Jackson at DEFCON.

Territorial Pissings:

Ugh, left out on a cliffhanger! Hate that. Great segment work between Dane and Brunk. The main event is getting more interesting by the moment!

THE HOLLYWOOD BRUVS VS. ANDY SHARP AND L.A.R.

Great match. I'm humbled by the excellent writing I see all over this DEF card and this is just another prime example. I honestly feel out of my league the more and more I read. LAR and Andy Sharp with the squeaker win, is this a foreshadowing of DEFCON?

Old Yeller:

Marshall Owens is such an easy character to hate I love it. Which makes hating Sean Jackson that much easier. Sean Jackson with the obvious statement of his plan to destroy . Solid promo work. Nice finishing touch on the closing, I was wondering how Old Yeller would factor into this promo.

Mushigihara vs. Curtis Penn:

Come on Keebs branch out a little bit! Brown pants man! Brown pants! Strange ending to this match, as I am not too familiar with all the characters involved but it looks like Mushi got saved, but was also upset about the save. Regardless seems like Mushi was going to get the loss in this one. So I dunno… guess more will come from this story.

These are not the droids you're looking for:

On the prowl. Good filler.

Does it really:

Woot! Impulse.. long time since I've read what he's been up to other than Uncut 9. So glad this character is here and hope for the opportunity to work with him in the future. Uh oh, he pulled Curtis Penn out of the back. Curtis Penn vs. Impulse at DEFCON? I'm pumped.

Bronson Box vs. Jack Hunter

Holy shit I just witnessed a murder. DEFIANCE is fucking amazing.

Road to Redemption:

Eugene Dewey making a good promo, I know so little about the history of Defiance but it seems like this gave me a brief glimpse into an old school back and forth battle that's been going on for years, they were even allies at one point? Interesting. Considering the promo Box cut at #9, it's surprising that they were on the same side at any point. DEFCON is growing bigger and bigger in my mind right now.

Won't get fooled again:

Jonny Bedlam:
Ehhhh, I don’t think DEFIANCE is the place for me. I’m gonna have to bow out.
And just like that, Jonny Bedlam is gone.
Andy Murray:
Well… looks like Jonny Bedlam was only here…
He pulls a pair of shades out and slides them onto his face.
Andy Murray:
… for a cup of coffee.
The Who:
YEAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Cut.

Lmao wtf.. I was trying to think what to write about that segment and then I saw this ending.. Interesting tidbit. Definitely gave me a good laugh. Segment was great, I really enjoyed the pep talk from LT. Now… it's time for the main event.

Real quick…

Lindsay Troy:
Why would Andy kill him? It’s not like Bobby’s got red eyes, an endless amount of incoherent, contradictory babble to spew, and the ability to summon thunder with a single clap…

Was part of this statement a Reaper jab or am I just out of the loop, probably just out of the loop but if it was a jab, I like it.

LINDSAY TROY AND CAYLE MURRAY VS. DAN RYAN AND ERIC DANE

The moment we've been waiting for here. Apparently Squidboy is fighting with his brain and Angus doesn't like it. lol. Murray gets that cheap shot in somewhat early to cause Murray's momentum to slow down and the FIST took quick advantage of it. Freaking ninja star reference again! Damn wasn't expecting the way that match ended, really wanted to see Cayle and LT pick up the win. However it was a great match.

OVERALL:

This is my first full card I've had a chance to read, the length was simply amazing and it took me a looonng time to finish but I enjoyed it a lot. Can't wait for my opportunity to participate on it. You guys are all extremely super talented. I'm just going to try and not make a fool out of myself; if I hadn't already.

 

[Evan H.]

Re: DEFCON ARC DISCUSSION THREAD -- UNCUT #7 IS ON THE AIR!!

I'm going to get my feedbacks up tomorrow, but just have to give props to my man Damien for this line. I can't wait to write this fuckin' match dude. Hit me up soon, with hype this good we got our work cut out for us.

Eugene Dewey:
I believed him because I had seen it time and time again. Every time I allied myself with someone they did the old disappearing trick. The Mage, Christian Light, Tom Sawyer… It was only a matter of time before Dusty Griffith was gonna follow their lead… And it wasn’t just the white hats that came and went. On the other side of the fence you had Kai Scott, Jeff Andrews, Edward White… Where are they all now? There is only one Big Bad in DEFIANCE, and I’m facing him at DEFCON 1.