Thank you for the praise good sir. More feedback yes?
Gonna try my hand...
But first of all, I've never watched an issue of Supernatural. No idea what
it's about or how it's connected to a lil' Grim Reaper thingy like Spooky
Doom. Sorry.
I like the Whisky vs Mayweather feud but Whisky is acting like the world's chicken**** (accusing the face of cheating when he cheats more than anyone) in that he looks like he could physically dominate Mary-Lynn at any moment but just prefers to mouth off for the sake of mouthing off. I think the feud would work better were Showtime RP a smaller character.
Nasr-Patton is my match. Glad it comes off as somewhat technical because in
the absence of anything to promote, I can still promote good wrestling.
Spooky's match: commas everywhere! I'm gonna have to work my character so
that he comes off as the hardest hitting guy in the world (see latest
ULTRATITLE promo) and less like the guy that runs around the ring a lot and
gets his offence caught all the early portion of the match or else people
won't take me seriously.
I was expecting more wrestling from Mr. Wrestling. Go figure. The action
from the match itself was rather confusing and as Minstrel said, the real
meat is the set-up to the feud. Dang, now I realize I need a feud. Some
backstager with Go-Go would be the obvious choice but the character is busy
enough as it is.
Kuro vs Waltz: Waltz getting the jobber entrance seals this (though I'm guilty of using the jobber entrance shtick too). I wanted to see more banter/more description of moves/flow rather than have the description talk about "the flow" of the match.
GoGo vs Minstrel: Short, although well described. Q.: The Pele kick hits what's
behind you, if the ref
confronts Go Go, how can he be hit by it?
Match of the night belongs to the main event. I'm also losing some bits of the conversation: don't assume readers know everything that's going on in the card? Who's the yellow guy? Is it Vizier? Since he'sa heel, shouldn't Anderson support him?