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[Red Devastator]

I've just posted my first promo with this character. I was thinking about makiing an inner type of angle out if it for the purpose of character development. I would appreciate some feedback so I know what I might've done right or wrong. Thanks ahead.

 

[TSiegel]

Just by glancing, it looks as if you're trying to build up the character-storyline, which is fine.....but you can also do that in the General RP type-section that I'm sure Sean has somewhere.

You did fine, btw.

Tom