RAUCOUS Feedback.

[TheOriginalSE]

I want some feedback. Remember now, this is my first full card that I've written for a few years ... so I'll be a little rusty

Anywho ..

1) FAVORITE MATCH

2) LEAST FAVORITE MATCH

3) BEST LINE

4) BEST SPOT

5) ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO ADD.

-- Please give me honesty... I want to work on improving and getting rid of the rest of my rust.

-sean

 

[Starbreaker]

I must applaud the card. Honestly, it was a great read and PPV-quality in my opinion!

1) FAVORITE MATCH: Well, my own was the favorite, but I think the BEST match was the main event. I really got into the whole thing, all around. And the end of the card was unexpected.

2) LEAST FAVORITE MATCH: I would say the card opener. It's difficult to have a solid, realistic handicap match, in my opinion.

3) BEST LINE: Hmm....not sure. I'd have to look the card over again.

4) BEST SPOT: Well...it's hard for me not to say the finish to the Hansen/McMillan vs. Tact/Iris match. I thought it was an awesome way to finish it. But that probably sounds arrogant and it is biased, so I apologize. Aside from that...hmm....I liked the way Suicidal Killer handled Michaels and the American on the outside, at one point. It was an impressive display, and not unrealistic, as Killer's huge and could actually do that. There were a few memorable spots, though.

5) ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO ADD.
Well, I think this was a great start to New ERA of Wrestling! It shows the potential of the talent, and the solid quality of cards. I think one thing to note would be to make sure not to do too many clusters, as it can come back to bite you. This card had a few cluster-like brawls with all four guys getting into the ring, which was okay. But just don't do it for every match. Just a caution.

I think it was good how you made everyone look strong. My match, for example, didn't seem to make anyone look weak. Nobody looked invincible either, which was another plus; everyone had soft spots here and there, and everyone had things exploited about them. I thought it made for a fair match, and it showed that all the talent is neither invincible nor weak. So great job on that.

Enough from me, though. Great job!

 

[SteelCitySon]

Hey bro... great first card, I thoroughly enjoyed the sumb*tch. =)



1) FAVORITE MATCH: The main event was great... I hope Hart stays around for awhile.

2) LEAST FAVORITE MATCH: Silver's no show cost their match a bunch. Otherwise, it was solid.

3) BEST LINE: All of the lines about File were great.. I can't pick just one haha.

4) BEST SPOT: Your use of foreign objects at the end... mmmm... BLOOOOOOOOOOD. i'm a mark for sadistic sh*t like that. haha

5) ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO ADD: Just a great card bro... i mean it =) Keep up the good work... I'm proud to say we're affiliated with you guys!


Sincerely,

Miller

 

[Suicidal Killer]

Killer's Feedback

1) FAVORITE MATCH: I really enjoyed the first and last match. I thought you did a great job representing both Cross' and my character. It will take time for me to get used to everyone else's character, however, I really do like the luchador El Arco Iris, and i really do like the color commentator. he's funny, but can also give actual wrestling props when need be... hahhaa... very good job

2) LEAST FAVORITE MATCH: None all were excellent.

3) BEST LINE: When Jive was building up Doc Silver, and then he no showed... all the commentary during that was pretty funny about Doc calling himself God and then Gheorghe brings him back down to earth.. pretty good stuff.

4) BEST SPOT: I would have to say the finish for Iris's match was a good spot. Also the main event had a great finish.

5) ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO ADD: Always like to see SK take some nice shots to the face. Placing him on his ass to only release his anger. He does have a temper. And then in the end hand cuff the brutal beast like a prisoner. Kool job. Don't want him to be too dominant. I mean he is a dumb slow Giant. He does have his weaknesses


overall i give this a 4 star rating out of 5 possible stars as being the first card of NEW.