Here's what I sent in for my bracket 3 judging. Again, nothing personal if I'm harsh in some of these. I read every RP in each thread in one sitting and judged them immediately afterward, as is my usual method. I'm very very blunt.
1. Cancer Jiles v. True Face: CANCER JILES over TRUE FACE, 8-2
Love the Cancer Jiles character. True Face seems like maybe there's potential there, but Jiles is top notch and one decent promo for Face against two very good ones from Jiles just can't cut it.
2. Jackson v. Edmunds: EDMUNDS over JACKSON, 7-3
I liked the Jackson promo a lot, but Edmunds' posts to me are a very very good example of tying in the storytelling style with a trash talking script style and making it work really well. That and, of course, two great roleplays beat one great roleplay, even if I were call Jackson's great, which is iffy. It was really good though.
3. Phantom Republican v. Henderson Bramble: PHANTOM REPUBLICAN over BRAMBLE, 10-0
Jobbertime.
4. Johnny Tropic v. Shane Rothenstein: ROTHENSTEIN over TROPIC, 10-0
Jobbertime.
5. Grim Reaper v. Jacob McKail: MCKAIL over REAPER, 10-0
Jobbertime.
6. Vagabond v. Eli Flair: VAGABOND over ELI FLAIR, 6-4
This is gonna be controversial, and when this goes public, will annoy Pete, but I really thought his posts were way WAY too long and a little self-indulgent. Meanwhile I really enjoyed the Vagabond posts. There were quite well done and I look forward to reading more from that guy in DEFIANCE.
7. Eric Dane v. Go-Go Spectacular: DANE over GO-GO, 9-1
Dane was pretty brilliant with the trash talk, getting me to audibly chuckle multiple times. I feel for Patrick here, because he tries really hard and has lots of ideas and determination, but he's no match for Dane here. It wasn't really that close, in my opinion.
8. Wesley Paige v. Matt Caje: CAJE over PAIGE, 10-0
Jobbertime.
9. Swerve v. Troy Franklin: FRANKLIN over SWERVE, 10-0
No show. Of note, Franklin wasn't very good, but goes forward on a technicality.
10. Kendall Codine v. Steve Jackson: CODINE over JACKSON, 6-4
I don't really like the idea of replying to your opponent line by line like Codine did in his second. However, overall I still judged him better by about a 7-3 margin, to I deducted a point for that tactic. Jackson v. Codine sounds like a good long term program, and I would find that interesting based on the backstory, but I do give Codine the edge in this one.
11. Azreal v. Mikey Massacre: MIKEY MASSACRE over AZREAL, 10-0
No show for Azreal. Man, this bracket is no-show and jobberrific.
12. Black v. Alias: ALIAS over BLACK, 10-0
And again.
13. Frank Wilkes v. Max Blackshire: BLACKSHIRE over WILKES, 10-0
Aaaaaaaand again.
14. Kiyomori v. Karl Brown: KIYOMORI over KARL BROWN, 5-5
Hmm. I thought Brown was really bland here and basic. Kiyomori was better, but I also found the weird font changes in the first one odd. I know he was doing italics for description, but at times the font itself looked changed, like it was cut and paste with formatting from somewhere else. I dunno. Looked strange and distracted me a bit. Still, the character seemed to come through more and like I said, Brown was more bland than I've seen from him in the past.
15. Boogie Smallz v. Jack Eastwood: SMALLZ over EASTWOOD, 10-0
I did not finish Eastwood's second promo. I just wanted it to end. To say it wasn't for me is putting it mildly. Smallz wasn't spectacular and didn't need to be. I don't want to read fan fiction about a guy who happens to be a wrestler. I didn't like the Eastwood stuff AT ALL. Once he got around to trash talking, it was just vulgar for the sake of being vulgar. I never thought there was a good line, and I took away every point I gave him in the first place for using the N-word. It didn't even seem like trash talk, the way it was used. It was just said matter of factly, and was awful. Sorry buddy. No bueno.
16. Mark McNasty v. Jesse Ramey: MARK MCNASTY over JESSE RAMEY, 5-5
My hopes were really up for Ramey. McNasty I didn't really know very well. I thought both guys were pretty flat. They didn't even really get started and they were done, and never posted again. Sucks. I don't think either really deserve to go over some of the guys I've already sent packing with losses, but someone has to win. Since Ramey disappointed me more, I gave McNasty the edge. Sorry Jesse.