thegr817deuce
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I know we've already started one of these, and thank you to the kind words from everyone so far (excluding Edmunds because I want him back handling in my fed )
Anyway, what I'm really looking for is feedback on the shortforming. Of course, this card is a PPV so it will be standard writing, but what about next Revolution? Do we keep this intact?
IMO, this was a fabulous turnaround and nothing was really sacrificed as far as story-telling. I know you might still be saying that it took a week to get up, but remember that I was delayed to start with three other matches and then finals. In all, this could be done in one, maybe two days depending on my free time. (BTW, big ups to Josh on helping me get yet another card out. He did two of the matches for me.)
Anyway, lemme know what you guys think.
-Shane
Anyway, what I'm really looking for is feedback on the shortforming. Of course, this card is a PPV so it will be standard writing, but what about next Revolution? Do we keep this intact?
IMO, this was a fabulous turnaround and nothing was really sacrificed as far as story-telling. I know you might still be saying that it took a week to get up, but remember that I was delayed to start with three other matches and then finals. In all, this could be done in one, maybe two days depending on my free time. (BTW, big ups to Josh on helping me get yet another card out. He did two of the matches for me.)
Anyway, lemme know what you guys think.
-Shane