SUPERCRASH 3...IS POSTED!

[jediPREZ]

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Major, major shoutout to Gethard for everything he put into this show RP and match-wise.

Also major props to EVERYONE who participated. There wasn't a weak link anywhere on this show due to the great matchwriting and RPing. Thank you to all for making this happen. I just hope it's worth the wait and hype.

My only piece of feedback after reading it all -- I think we've reached v.4.

DISCUSS. FEEDBACK. HOLLA!

 

[Biron]

Wow-za.

Well done, fellas.

I'll give a bit more in-depth feedback/reaction later.

Billy, you win line of the night. Playoff beard? Priceless.

 

[Legion]

Well after thoroughly reading the show... I can fully agree with Katz that we have reached version 4.0. Firstly from a music standpoint loved the use of The Black Angels' 'The Sniper' for the big reveal and speaking of that... got to say reading it not afraid to say I marked out BIG!

From a Legion standpoint the return of one, well let's say the last time anyone saw the one revealed last he walked out during a match Legion waa in so possible unfinished business.

On another note every piece of Legion's story was great to read (Billy's lines including the one Biron mentioned already, Pete's writing for the referee gig and Ben's line on what the black dust could be along with the Jason hervey deal... awesome stuff.)

A hearty pat on the back for all and now for myself to think on who the next traget for Legion will be and how he's going to counter an associate of one...

 

[jediPREZ]

I also forgot to throw out some props to Ehhhh Pete! for the "Out of the Fire" series which he wrote last week. Helped tie together the storyline elements from an outsider POV really well. Along with all this RP and the first Nat. Title match, he threw down the gauntlet for this one as well.

 

[jediPREZ]

Well after thoroughly reading the show... I can fully agree with Katz that we have reached version 4.0. Firstly from a music standpoint loved the use of The Black Angels' 'The Sniper' for the big reveal and speaking of that... got to say reading it not afraid to say I marked out BIG!

From a Legion standpoint the return of one, well let's say the last time anyone saw the one revealed last he walked out during a match Legion waa in so possible unfinished business.

On another note every piece of Legion's story was great to read (Billy's lines including the one Biron mentioned already, Pete's writing for the referee gig and Ben's line on what the black dust could be along with the Jason hervey deal... awesome stuff.)

A hearty pat on the back for all and now for myself to think on who the next traget for Legion will be and how he's going to counter an associate of one...

Just got into the Black Angels...it's like garage band blues meets the Doors, I really dig it.

The real question is if Legion knew more than you did going into this show? 'Cause part of the fun in writing the 13 storyline was the fact Legion figured it out who it was...but I never specifically told you.

 

[Rook Black]

Well after thoroughly reading the show... I can fully agree with Katz that we have reached version 4.0. Firstly from a music standpoint loved the use of The Black Angels' 'The Sniper' for the big reveal and speaking of that... got to say reading it not afraid to say I marked out BIG!

From a Legion standpoint the return of one, well let's say the last time anyone saw the one revealed last he walked out during a match Legion waa in so possible unfinished business.

On another note every piece of Legion's story was great to read (Billy's lines including the one Biron mentioned already, Pete's writing for the referee gig and Ben's line on what the black dust could be along with the Jason hervey deal... awesome stuff.)

A hearty pat on the back for all and now for myself to think on who the next traget for Legion will be and how he's going to counter an associate of one...

Heh, glad you liked it. Though both items you liked from my match were actually Katz edits. I had a Jack "The Ripper" Nobbledy reference that Katz snipped. But still, cool stuff.

 

[jediPREZ]

I was afraid of the JACK reference!

 

[Ford]

I read most of the show last night. Reading the main event now. I'll give thoughts when I'm finished.

Just a quick edit, I noticed it kinda glaringly...

CROWD: "BABY JACK! BABY JACK!"

H’WOOD: "Bobby Jack might be a blue-chip prospect… but he’s also got a temper even worse than Eddie’s! But, still… I’d probably lose it to if I knew that the man across the ring from my bent my mother over a desk every night!"

O’CONNOR: "Bobby Jack is beside himself, threatening Mayfield and kicking the ropes! And Impulse gets up – CRADLE! ONE! TWO! NO!"

H’WOOD: "Bobby Jack might be a blue-chip prospect… but he’s also got a temper even worse than Eddie’s! But, still… I’d probably lose it to if I knew that the man across the ring from my bent my mother over a desk every night!"


REPETITION!

 

[Biron]

Few other parts where lines weren't separated, also, but nothing terrible.

 

[Legion]

I had a feeling Flyer would have been involved in some capacity given the deal during the gauntlet, add Flyer's bit where he begged to be booked on Supercrash into the mix as well and it all begins to add up rather nicely.

 

[Ford]

Spoilers Ahead. DUH.

Show was so awesome I'm gonna use an outdated phrase and say it was "off the hook." Definitely lived up to the Supercrash's of old, well, at least 2. I don't think I've read 1 in full yet myself. From a personal standpoint, High Flyer better get a big bonus for wrestling four matches straight .

Good start/set up to the show, although Supercrash 2's video package blows Supercrash 3's out of the water. But all the pre-segs really set the stage for the importance of the evening.

Tag match was solid but slightly anti-climatic. I wanted to see the tag titles change hands personally, see the Windham clan start their quest for the gold, but keeping the belts on the HWC keeps the Dynasty strong, so no problems there. Plus it would have meant every title match on the show crowned a new champion.

Pete's work to tie the show together with Impulse's chat really worked wonders. Although because I know the character so well, it did slightly give away the fact that Deacon would show up, although I still didn't believe it. I hope Warren sticks around for the long haul. He's an awesome handler with a great character and, for me, there's a lot of history there between Deac and Fly.

I loved the motif of the Alamo Dome and how no one really got out of the actual Alamo alive, and how ever present that was on this show, especially in the main event where it's specifically called out and referenced as such. Great choice for a venue.

Thanks to Pants and Pete for writing the National Championship glory. It was an awesome end to a long running angle, and certainly sets up a bit of Flyer/Curio fun if Andy's game. Also, Katz, that speech you wrote for Flyer after the match was all kinds of awesome. Pure unbridled lunacy filled with an ADHD attention span. Perfection.

Glad Biron got some recognition and is the Television Champ. I thought SJH was gonna win it just to "reset" the legacy of the belt, if you will. My only complaint about the television title match is the lack of a clear strong face for the fans to get behind during it. But that's more of NFW's willingness to cator to the heel demographic than any slight on the match writer themself.

As for the Hall induction, I was hoping Nova would physically show up. And then when the chaos went off in the main event, I was really hopin' he'd show up. Randalls was a good second choice though.

The main event definitely had the gravitas that it deserved. Kudos to the match writer and everyone else who set things in motion. The match itself wasn't a five star affair, but was VERY well done. The story it told, with each character having a true role in the match, was pitch perfect. Dorchester causing Mayfield to lose and then getting himself DQ'd was a nice touch, although I wish Dorchester did more than just push the ref. Even if he did it twice after getting warned the first time. Seems like the official was really lenient up until that point. Mayfield as the fifth man was sweet, although as I read I was hopin' it'd be the return of Craig Miles.

Congrats to JJ for the final pin. Looks like big things are in store, especially with Windham telling everyone to protect Ryan as the chaos occurred. That's how you end a show with a cluster ****.

Big kudos to everyone involved.

 

[Ford]

I had a feeling Flyer would have been involved in some capacity given the deal during the gauntlet, add Flyer's bit where he begged to be booked on Supercrash into the mix as well and it all begins to add up rather nicely.

Glad it wasn't completely obvious though. I figured if Flyer weren't booked at Supercrash in some fashion people might have assumed he was Thirteen before the show even came out. Hence.

 

[jediPREZ]

Fixed the repetition bit in the main!

Thanks for the keen eye to details.

 

[GreggG]

Thanks for the feedback and edit catches -- had to cut and paste from a few different computers and the like when writing this.

I really loved writing this match. I try to write matches that are really simple -- writing super complex moves and situations is too hard for me and I don't watch things like ROH too much so figuring those moves out is hard. So I like writing crisp things.

In terms of how I like to write matches -- this might have been my favorite finished product. I tried to wind together a whole bunch of different narratives into a bigger plot.

Dorchester's shove was supposed to come off as a real malicious dick move -- probably should have written that clearer. Like he causes Herpin to fall on his ass. It also came after Herpin warned both sides about the constant run-ins, so he was going to be quick with a DQ after any tomfoolery he catches.

 

[Ford]

Thanks for the feedback and edit catches -- had to cut and paste from a few different computers and the like when writing this.

I really loved writing this match. I try to write matches that are really simple -- writing super complex moves and situations is too hard for me and I don't watch things like ROH too much so figuring those moves out is hard. So I like writing crisp things.

In terms of how I like to write matches -- this might have been my favorite finished product. I tried to wind together a whole bunch of different narratives into a bigger plot.

Dorchester's shove was supposed to come off as a real malicious dick move -- probably should have written that clearer. Like he causes Herpin to fall on his ass. It also came after Herpin warned both sides about the constant run-ins, so he was going to be quick with a DQ after any tomfoolery he catches.

I think that came across fine, although Herpin being taken off his feet would have made the DQ resonate better. Still, it was organic, I wasn't saying that. I wonder if Herpin will be yelled at by Mayfield in the future for limiting NFW's chances or Mayfield, at that point, puts more of the blame on Dorchester and goes after him.

 

[jediPREZ]

For all anyone knows yet, Mayfield may have told Herpin to DQ Dorchester the first chance he got before the match ever started. hehehe

 

[User Poets]

Pete's work to tie the show together with Impulse's chat really worked wonders. Although because I know the character so well, it did slightly give away the fact that Deacon would show up, although I still didn't believe it. I hope Warren sticks around for the long haul. He's an awesome handler with a great character and, for me, there's a lot of history there between Deac and Fly.

Just as a heads up, I had no idea Deacon was going to show up until I read "A Presidential Plan" and recognized the speech patterns. Deacon and Shep were not part of the conversation with Impulse and Rose. I had a feeling it would be Big D since Katz fed me a quick edit for one of the segments (note, it's the only segment in the history of Impulse to have actual cursing in it) and I said "Aha, that makes sense."

I'm going to give the show a more in depth read and review when I'm at work (responsibility!) but my 80% was great. I think things are just about to get interesting.

 

[jediPREZ]

Yeah...

Presidential Plan -- that was the only pre-Deacon/Shep moment they were in.

Pete can expand on his segments if anyone wants...I thought they set up the tone for the future very, very well.

 

[Stalker]

To say I enjoyed the show would be an understatement.

The arrival of Stalker and The Fallen was exactly as I wanted it to be. Couldn't have asked for it to be written any better then it was. So props to Billy on that one.

I definitely was experiencing a WTF moment when I read that High Flyer was Thirteen. OOC wise if I had experienced that on Television or in person High Flyer would have become my favorite wrestler of all time.

Something like that goes down in history books. Epic performance.

Personally for me as amazing as the show was, man was it even more overwhelming. That's not a knock, I was just amazed by everything that was going down. A lot of it I couldn't really mark out for because I honestly am unaware of much of the history behind characters like Deacon and Randalls.

That being said, this feels like a great jumping in point. New champions, huge rivalries being started. What happens from this point forward has me more excited then anything. I look forward to continuing what I started and hope one day, the product I deliver will live up to what happened at Supercrash.

That's a lot of hoping.

 

[Deacon]

I did find a way in to see the card, but only had time to do a quick scan and realize I have a LOT of work to do to get caught up. Fortunately, I do have some background w/ many of the characters just no idea of what's transpired since I pulled out of fdub. I'm not worried though, I still have Pete's number. That's right, one phone call and I'll know everything in NFW, CSWA, and fWo for that last 10 years.

You can expect some rust in doing the wrestling gig, but I'm still pretty current w/ writing Deac (which was evidenced by people picking out his mannerisms).