Sorry I've been sucking it up on feedback recently, just now caught up with the shows, but let me just say that final segment with Strife and Dane was pure f*cking MONEY. I have no idea what the angles/shoots were/are revolving around how/why it was written, but Chadwick's indignant response to the request for an Arnold Palmer, as well as his line about art, had me howling.
I'll try to be more in-depth next round, but I have to save my energies for actually RPing on BRAWL.
Also, kudos to Voss on the B-R-A-W-L feedback format. I may be adopting that in the future.